Darkness is always associated with something evil or something depressing.
But we who live in the city don’t know what darkness is.
You realize when you look out of the window from a dimly lit night flight.
You are flying over deserted land and see darkness…so dark and beautiful – so peaceful and serene.
You wish you could sleep every night in this environment.
Am sure the weariness we feel would be lifted if only our nights were as dark as this
You realize in wonder that the world is round after all
when beyond the darkness, in the horizon you see a light pink light.
In that land beyond, someone is packing their bag to go back home,
Someone is looking forward to the best time of the day with their family
They have a little bit of the day left – just a little bit.
And then you see your city from the air.
So beautiful at night with all its lights
The lights look like a cluster of diamonds
The dirt, the slums, the ugliness all hidden
You feel a tug in your heart
A city you have spent 13 years of your life.
There was a time when this city meant
Coming home to mamma,our happy life here – shopping, fighting et all
It meant friends and hostel and all the madness that friendship involves
Today sometimes the city seems a mechanical place where i drift in and out of an office
But then comes the weekend and the city transforms
To a happy place with my home, friends and my weekend life
Ensuring i can never be indifferent to this tough city
The flight lands,
I have been away from this city only a day
A few minutes of “intense” coordination see me in my comfortable swiffy reddy (red swift…duhhh)
With him who makes any place home.
1st ?
yes and that’s all u have to say???????/ Hmmmph
no I’m reading the post Nuts !!! Ufff yeh ghussa π waise you toh are not seen on my blog at all π¦
No babe…not seen any blog…i have like 69 unread posts…i shall be there soon…:-)
how cute that was…you’ve put a simple feeling in beautiful words Nuts π
Phew adha ghanta laga padne ke liye π
Thank u
hahaah no was multitasking re π and trust me re-read your poetic take on darkness and the view from the aeroplane π
Wow! what a wonderful post Nuttie …out of the box thinking by an aeroplane window π
Absolutely loved it π π
Thank u mah dahling..u r too kind!
‘so dark so beautiful’ – I have felt that too though I can barely see anything π
Nice poem π
Poem..??? Ummmm Ummmm…:D
It had that feel to it π
Good one, Nuts. Expressed beautifully!
Thank u T!
Aah I know what you are saying..I know the city..I love that city..
What a city!!! it manages to really cheese u off and in one sweep makes u fall in love with it again π
I love the last line! π
ahhh the romantic…Chinki the romantic??? Hmmm!
Not allowed? π
well….ok fine…permission granted…:P
So wonderfully put. I always loved the darkness, and used to prefer night over day. Off late though, I find dark nights a little creepy π¦
We all feel drawn to a particular city. Mumbai evokes such sentiments in me.
Aaah Amchi mumbai girl…lol was talking about Mumbai π
Awww! Absolutely loved the last line! Sigh π
Phew all romantics here….!!!! Sheesh! What no like horizons??? and darkness…Sighhhh! It’s all this diwali cheer which is spreading
Beautiful lines. I love the darkness and the night time – everything’s so calm and serene. Reading your poem evoked memories of After Dark – a novel in which the entire story happens in one night π
Hmmmm interesting…i should pick it up…Who is it by?
I am very flattered that u think of this as poetry!
It’s by Haruki Murakami. I’m thinking a writing a review of the book π And indeed what you’ve written is poetry. no doubt π
Very Beautiful :).
thanks harini…welcome here…!!
Aww if the window can do this to u, pls to travel more often π
hehehe… ;-)….as long as there is no early morning flight…i m quite grumpy on that and the world dont look no pretty!
Awesomeeee π
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Ohhh I did just that when I flew over Cal this weekend.. identifying the stadium which I loved, the roads.. trying to make out the parks and then thinking and musing of all times good and bad … the bad ones made me wonder whether I should really have hopped on the flight ,… but then two pairs of out streched arms and warm glow on faces made me realise …this is where the heart lies despite all toils n turmoils and the warmth that makes a home π
Mommy Daddy hands??? Ahhhh home of course
yes yes yes Mommy Daddy hands and a big squissshhyyy hug .. which made everyone turn around at the airport and I gave them a “so u j that u dont have such parents huh” look π π
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So cute! Next time I fly I am going to think about these lines I know. It’s strange how being away from gravity can make you feel sometimes.
Thanks deboshree and welcome here